How would (I fay) mine eyes be bleffed By looking on thee in the living day, When in dead night thy fair imperfect th Through heavy fleep on fightlefs eyes dot All days are nights to fee, till I fee t And nights, bright days, when dream me. XLIV. If the dull fubftance of my flesh were thoug 7thy fair imperfect shade-] The old copy re two words, it has been already obferved, are frequent thefe Sonnets. MALONE. All days are nights to fee,] We should, perhaps, The compofitor might have caught the word fee fro line. MALONE. As, fair to fee (an expreffion which occurs in a h ballads) fignifies fair to fight, fo, all days are nights t days are gloomy to behold, i. e. look like nights. STE 9-do fbow thee me.] That is, do fhow thee to me. 1 -can jump both fea and land,] Jump has here it fication. In Shakspeare it often fignifies to bazar meaning in the well known paffage in Macbeth: (6 We'd jump the life to come." MALONE. 2-fo much of earth and water wrought,] i. e. bein compounded of thefe two ponderous elements. Thus, Cleopatra: "I am air and fire, my other elements "I give to bafer life." STEEVENS. Again, in King Henry V: "He is pure air and fire elements of earth and water never appear in him," MA Receiving nought by elements fo flow XLV. The other two, flight air and purging fire, My life, being made of four3, with two alone By thofe fwift meffengers return'd from thee, This told, I joy; but then no longer glad, XLVI. Mine eye and heart are at a mortal war 5, 3 My life, being made of four,-] So, in Twelfth Night: "Does not our life confift of the four elements ?" STEEVENS. their fair health. 4 Of thy fair bealth,] The old copy has MALONE. 5 Mine eye and beart are at a mortal war,] So, in a paffage in Golding's Tranflation of Ovid, 1576, which our authour has imitated in The Tempeft, p. 87: "Among the earth-bred brothers you a mortal war did fet." MALONE. 6-thy picture's fight would bar,] Here alfo their was printed inAtead of thy. MALONE. 7-thy fair appearance lies.] The quarto has their. In this Sonnet this mistake has happened four times. MALONE. Το To 'cide this title is impannelled $ XLVII. 4 Or, if they fleep, thy picture in my fight s To 'cide this title is impannelled-] To 'cide, for t 9 A quest of thoughts,-] An inqueft or jury. Richard III: "What lawful queft have given their verdict u "Unto the frowning judge?" MALONE. The clear eye's moiety,] Moiety in ancient la any portion of a thing, though the whole may not be See p. 81, n. *. MALONE. When that mine eye is famifh'd for a look,] So, in Errors: "While I at home farve for a merry look." M -bids my beart:] i. e. invites my heart. See V n. 3. MALONE. 3 So, either by thy picture or my love,] The modern ed intelligibly: So either by the picture of my love. MALONE. 4 Thyfelf away art prefent-] i. e. Thyfelf, though fent, &c. The old copy is here evidently corrupt. ftead of art. MALONE. It XLVIII. How careful was I, when I took my way, From whence at pleasure thou may't come and part; XLIX. Against that time, if ever that time come, But thou, to whom my jewels trifles are,] We have the fame allufion in King Richard 11: -Every tedious ftride I make, "Will but remember me what a deal of world "I wander from the jewels that I love." MALONE. 5 Within the gentle clofure of my breaft,] So, in K. Richard III: "Within the guilty clofure of thy walls." STEEVENS. 6 For truth proves thievith for a prize fo dear.] So, in Venus and Adonis : "Rich preys make rich men thieves." C. 7 Whenas thy love bath caft bis utmost fum,] Whenas, in ancient language, was fynonymous to when. MALONE. When love, converted from the thing it was, Shall reafons find of fettled gravity;] A fentiment fomewhat fimilar, ccurs in Julius Cæfar: "When love begins to ficken and decay, "It useth an enforced ceremony." STEEVENS. Against that time do I enfconce me here, L. How heavy do I journey on the way, When what I feek,-my weary travel's end,- For that fame groan doth put this in my mind,- LI. Thus can my love excufe the flow offence From where thou art why fhould I hafte me thence? 9 do I enfconce me bere,] 1 fortify myself. A fconce was a fpecies of fortification. See Vol. II. p. 151. n. 3. MALONE. Thus far the miles are meafur'd from thy friend!] So, in one of our author's plays: "Measuring our fteps from a departed friend." STEEVENS. See alfo the paflage quoted on the other fide, in n. *. MALONE. 2 Plods dully on,-] The quarto reads-Plods duly on. The con text fupports the reading that I have fubftituted. So, in the next Sonnet, where the fame thought is purfued : "Thus can my love excufe the flow offence O, what, |