30 Now was she just before him as he fat, And like a lowly lover down she kneels; Her other tender hand his fair cheek feels: His tender cheek receives her foft hand's print, O, what a war of looks was then between them! Full gently now fhe takes him by the hand, Or ivory in an alabafter band; So white a friend engirts fo white a foe: This beauteous combat, wilful and unwilling, Show'd like two filver doves that fit a billing. Once more the engine of her thoughts began: Give me my hand, faith he, why doft thou feel it? 4 And all this dumb play bad his acts made plain With tears, which, chorus-like, ber eyes did rain.] Fro prefent paffage, I think it probable, that this firft production of thour's mufe was not compofed till after he had left Stratford, came acquainted with the theatre. MALONE. 6 - left thy hard beart do fteel it,] So, in Othello: 66 foft fighs can never grave it;] Engrave it, i. e. make preffion on it. STEEVENS. Then love's deep groans I never fhall regard, For fhame, he cries, let go, and let me go; Thus fhe replies: Thy palfrey, as he should, The fea hath bounds, but deep defire hath none; How like a jade he stood, tied to a tree, Throwing the bafe thong from his bending creft, Who feeks his true love in her naked bed, *The fea bath bounds, but deep defire bath none;] So, in Macbeth a but there's no bottom, none, "To my voluptuoufnefs." W. 7 Who feeks bis true love in ber naked bed, Teaching the sheets a whiter hue than white,] So, in Cymbelines "How bravely thou becom'ft thy bed! fresh lilly! And whiter than the sheets." I have followed the earliest and most authentick copy yet difcovered, that of 1596. The octavo 1600, reads-Who fees. MALONE. 8 His other agents aim at like delight?] So alfo Macbeth expreffeth himself to his wife: 66 --I am fettled, and bend up "Each corporal agent to this terrible feat." AMNER. Who Who is fo faint, that dare not be fo bold, Let me excufe thy courfer gentle boy; I know not love, (quoth he,) nor will not know Who wears a garment fhapelefs and unfinish'd? 9 My love to love is love but to disgrace it ;] My inclination is only a defire to render it contemptible.-The fenfe is almo jingle of words. MALONE. For I bave beard it is a life in death, That laughs and weeps,] So, in King Richard III. Again, in Troilus and Creffida: "Thefe lovers cry,-Oh! oh! they die! "Oh! oh! a while; but ha! ha! ha! "Oh! oh! groans out for ha! ha! ha!" MALO 2 Who plucks the bud before one leaf put forth?] So, in beard's Song of Venus and Adonis, by H. C. 1600. "I am now too young "To be wonne by beauty; "I am yet a bud." MALONE, You hurt my hand with wringing; let us part 3, Difmifs your vows, your feigned tears, your flattery; What! canft thou talk, (quoth fhe,) haft thou a tongue ? Thy mermaid's voice hath done me double wrong; Had I no eyes, but ears, my ears would love Or, were I deaf, thy outward parts would move Though neither eyes nor ears, to hear nor fee, Say, 3 You burt my band with wringing; let us part,] So, in the song above quoted: "Wind thee from mee, Venus, I am not disposed; "Thou wringeft me too hard, Pr'ythee let me goe: "Fie, what a pain it is, MALONE. 4 Remove your fiege from my unyielding beart; To love's alarm it will not ope the gate:] So, in Romeo and Juliet: "You-to remove that fiege of grief from her,."” Again, ibid: "She will not ftay the fiege of loving terms." MALONE. 5 Thy mermaid's voice-] Our ancient writers commonly use mermaid for Syren. STEEVENS. See Vol. II. p. 166, n. I. 6 MALONE. and invifible;] I fufpect that both for the fake of better rhime, and better fenfe, we should read invincible. Thefe words are mifprinted, alternately one for the other, in K. Henry IV. P. II. and K. Jobn. STEEVENS. In the prefent edition, however, thereader will find the word invisible, in the paffage referred to in K. Jobn, and invincible, in the fecond part VOL. X. D of Say, that the fenfe of feelings were bereft me, But O, what banquet wert thou to the tafte, Once more the ruby-colour'd portal open'd, Sorrow to fhepherds, woe unto the birds, This of K. Henry IV. as thofe words ftand in the old copy. See Vol. IV. p. 365, n. 6, and Vol. V. p. 368, n. 4. An oppofition was, I think, clearly intended between external beauty, of which the eye is the judge, and a melody of voice, (which the poet calls inward beauty,) ftriking not the fight but the ear. I therefore believe invifible to be the true reading. MALONE. 5 Say, that the fenfe of feeling-] Thus the octavo, 1596. All the modern editions read reafon. MALONE. Comes breath perfum'd, &c.] So, in Conftable's poem: "Breathe once more thy balmie wind: "It fmelleth of the mirth tree "That to the world did bring thee, "Never was perfume fo fweet." MALONE. 7 And bid Sufpicion double lock the door 2 ] A bolder or happier perfonification than this, will not readily be pointed out in any of our authour's plays. MALONE. 8 Left jealousy, that four-unwelcome gueft, &c.] -ne quis malus invidere poffit, Quum tantum fciat effe bafiorum. Catullus.. MALONE. the ruby-colour'd portal open'd,] So, in K. Henry IV, P. II. By his gates of breath "There lies a downy feather, " MALONE. 3-foul flaws-] i. e. violent blafts of wind. See Vol.V. p. 393, n. 5. STEEVENS. " But |